all together kaycee english

what makes good creative writing!

Creativity is important because it sets you out from the crowd. it just means describing, using metaphors, thinking of different ways to make your point. Add your describing words into the story. 

similes: im like a cat 

the sun was like a yellow marble in the sky she has been elusive as a  sasquatch 

metaphor:i am a cat 

you are nothing but a hound dog cryin all the time 

1. Which was your favourite performance? Why?

i think the best one is ben stokes because he gives that vibe

to me he showing

what it was like. he was re telling the story about new zealand

2. i don't really know

3. there is that poster where it turns off the walls

this is that noise you can't stand anymore

we stay up late because who cares anyways we spill the drinks

with some steam

i don't have more time

to go and play i can only sit in my room and my back feels pain

he wants us all he wanted us to hang on he catches he

said he is all i want to be

there is no point we are moving on there is no point we will still

grow old

Winter seclusion -

Listening, that evening,

To the rain in the mountain.

i turned around to see you there i knew you were 5 feet away from me i could smell you hear your foot step creek up behide me you i grab your hand feeling the oain you were in you were so hunry and cold i gave you somthing warm to put on and a apple to eat you said this apple taste so sweet and then said thank you.............